Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Never has the amount of news been overwhelming as today and a large number of people are critical of the influence of the news media on their life. I believe modern day’s news media harms our way of life in several aspects.
Although good things do happen on a daily basis with equal number of the bad ones, most news agencies place a heavy focus on the latter, and this one-sided news coverage generates nothing but negative feeling, anxiety, and false impression. Merely watching the dark sides of the society, for instance, mass shootings, bank robberies, or car accidents, one may misleadingly assume such events occur with high frequency, which results in an extreme emotional disturbance that life in no longer safe. On the other hand, insufficient coverage of positive news compounds the erroneous impression that in a particular society, the future for the people are dim and threatened, thereby creating unnecessary stress.
Perplexity and bafflement are another detrimental effect of the news media when there excessively is exaggeration, fabrication, and distortion of news. Thanks to the Internet and advancement in information technology, news nowadays is spread in a matter of seconds. Meanwhile, it is arduous and challenging for the authority to control and certify as true thousand pieces of news published by dozens of news agencies every single hour. Consequently, viewers and audience of news may be encountered by enormous influx of news on even one subject matter without having an effective filtering instrument to sort out the right from the wrong news, ending up overtly bewildered and disoriented.
In summary, the news media’s unbalanced coverage of gloomy and depressing news and dishonest news report are unquestionably injurious to many people’s lives. Therefore, viewers and audience should be distinctly cautious about the news they receive via the news media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rms our way of life in several aspects. Although good things do happen on a dail...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34666666667 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93102939824 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646666666667 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.213201763 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.818181818 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2727272727 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234262684526 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975984565542 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528539303266 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154079577769 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477597277068 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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