You recently moved house and you used a removal company to help you move your belongings.
However, some of your things were damaged in the move. Write a letter to the manager of the removal company.
In your letter •
Give details of the move •
Describe the damage •
Say what you would like the manager to do Write at least 150 words.
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Dear Sir or Madam
I am Nav Puri, dweller of Hudson Road Texas penning down this epistle to lodge a complaint in regard to the negligence at your services. As I have been transferred to the head quarters of my company in New York, so i utilized your shipping agency to move my household belongings from Texas to New York last Saturday.
Since you have advertised about the perfection in your services, still there was lack of professionalism among your staff as they all were novice. Sadly, due to their reckless behavior , my newly bought furniture has been ravaged. Moreover, my crockery has been pathetically damaged due to poor handling skills shown by your workers.
As per your legal contracts , it is unambiguously clear that all damage during transit is the liability of your company. Hence, it would be highly appreciable if you could repair my belongings or compensate me with adequate amount of money so that i can repair it. I will be very thankful to you for your this act of kindness.
I am anticipating a prompt response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Navdeep Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam I am Nav Puri, dweller of Hudson Road Te...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: HEAD_QUARTERS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'headquarters'?
Suggestion: headquarters
...ices. As I have been transferred to the head quarters of my company in New York, so i utilize...
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Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... quarters of my company in New York, so i utilized your shipping agency to move m...
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Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sehold belongings from Texas to New York last Saturday. Since you have adverti...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e. Sadly, due to their reckless behavior , my newly bought furniture has been rava...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...handling skills shown by your workers. As per your legal contracts , it is unam...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...workers. As per your legal contracts , it is unambiguously clear that all dam...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al contracts , it is unambiguously clear that all damage during transit is the li...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e with adequate amount of money so that i can repair it. I will be very thankful ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, so, still, well, as to, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89304812834 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80076655094 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695187165775 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4527133049 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263134886916 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964133919228 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494068726307 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135820499853 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379621752235 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.