After being invovled in an accident , you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express you gratitude.
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear Ms.Catherian,
My name is samvedna Puri and currently residing at hakward street, north london. Hope you remember this previous patient to whom you offered the medical services. I am
feeling grateful while inscribing this epistle to express my gratuity for your valuable lookafter for my health. After being hospitalised for 45 days, further it took half month to return in conscious and able to write this letter.
Since, it has been two months that i met with a horrible accident which inflicted several severe injuries. Afterward, my parents communicated me about you who looked after me for such a long period voluntary during hospital days. Even though, we were unknown to each other but still the assistance provided from your end was appreciable and unforgettable for the rest of my life.
Although the human services are valueless and can not repaid by any means, i certainly anticipate you to endow with my hospitality. Therefore, you have to pay a visit at my place so i could do something in consideration. Moreover, in future if you need any kind of aid, i will be at distance of a call. My contact number is 0123-85367 and inform me regarding your visit as per your convenience.
Hope hear from you soon and once again heartly thank you.
Your sincerely,
Samvedna Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Catherian
Dear Ms.Catherian, My name is samvedna Puri and curren...
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Line 3, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m you offered the medical services. I am feeling grateful while inscribing this e...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cious and able to write this letter. Since, it has been two months that i met with...
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Line 6, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... Since, it has been two months that i met with a horrible accident which infl...
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Line 8, column 55, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'repay'
Suggestion: repay
...uman services are valueless and can not repaid by any means, i certainly anticipate yo...
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Line 8, column 183, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... you have to pay a visit at my place so i could do something in consideration. Mo...
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Line 8, column 271, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... in future if you need any kind of aid, i will be at distance of a call. My conta...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96803652968 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79318468683 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.721461187215 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4879450423 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6923076923 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.53846153846 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258437747774 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089864764079 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0728329430376 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150437799685 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509582282003 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.