Corona Virus is becoming a big problem for todays' Society as a result of it thousands of people are suffering as well as govenrments losing a big part of budget. While COVID 19 is treating the globe from polluting and other affects of humanity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Although,it is undeniable that as a consequence of big problem that Corona Virus not only society but also government are today suffering from losing a major part of budget . This virus is preventing from both polluting and other affects of humanity according to some. In my opinion,deciding whether to be bad affect for government or being useful should depend on not only money problems but also time management for having a rest.
On the one hand , Covid 19 can actually affect to life condition of people belong to money . Because owing to this virus , almost all organizations is nowadays being closed. Therefore,some people might ve meeting some difficulties belong to budget problems. Espesially, the staff lived account to salary are nowadays witnessing painful condition . In addition to , Covid 19 may basically compromise life of older people . Because they have a lot of trouble according to their health. Because of this pandemic virus,the older and sick society are suffering from it.
On the other hand, Corona virus is bringing on having a good reliationship thier family members for the staff with it providing with valuable moment and rest . Especially,for teenagers who dislike going to the school . It is the best condition to stay at home . It might rander healthy life invatebly. Almost everyone are today conforming personal hygiene .
Finally,in my view, both opinions are indespensible for people's life but the focus should depend on their condition and lifestyle. While everyone are fighting against Covid 19,government ought to fund for it .
In conclusion, despite people having different views , I believe it would be harmful for all people, If they stove off it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27573529412 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92835134723 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3335914374 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307558068703 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779152619495 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840993325112 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149596301756 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0999283146998 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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