You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter.
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Catherian,
Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am feeling disheartedly while inscribing this epistle to get acquainted you with the prevalling untoward situations in my home country. Well-known virus 'covid-19' has become the burning headlines of news as it is attacking the prominet geographical areas of nation.
Since, it has been a month that dwellers are suffering from unpropitious effects of fatal virus which is leading to high death toll across the whole country. Even though the literacy rate of ever burgeoning populuation of India is meager, major portion of denizens is depicting depth interest in media to avail current status of nation.
Unfortunately, one of my closely associated relatives got infected as he travlled last month to china where this deadly ailment got birth. Beside all the fact, it is better to take precautions than cure. You and your family need to opt some proactive measures to be secure.
Hope to hear from you soon and have a safe time ahead untill next time.
Your lovingly,
samvedna Puri.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2022-01-09 | shain | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-03 | manu_kaur113 | 78 | view |
| 2021-01-31 | swodha | 81 | view |
| 2021-01-04 | skgurna4567@gmail.com | 70 | view |
| 2020-11-23 | Zoey1001 | 11 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home country. Well-known virus covid-19 has become the burning headlines of news...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ominet geographical areas of nation. Since, it has been a month that dwellers are ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12849162011 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68972222757 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731843575419 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3294606189 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121429172997 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469818130925 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485208917962 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0484975602138 0.12726935374 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197779222831 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.77 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.