Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures
It is true that pressures from academic, social and commercial perspectives have inflicted considerable harm on children for a number of reasons.I believe some effective solutions from parents and government should be taken to reduce these pressures.
There are several reasons why children have to face such pressures from academic . Firstly, getting good scores was concerned because of a believe that it could reflect children’s abilities. Passing with flying colors is an indispensable part of an exam-driven education which accidentally put a pressure on our children. For example, my best friend was being stressful because his teacher forced him to pass the final examination with a high score . Secondly, expectation form parents also creates some pressures on their children. They want their children to carry on their dreams or even force them to study without any spread time. According to scientists, children who have to carry their parents’ expectations on being what they want have a tendency to become autism.
Fortunately, some possible solutions have been taken to reduce these pressures. First, government should transform the educational system immediately, by far impose restrictions on private classes. Moreover, teachers should ask parents encourage their children to take part in clubs in lieu of going to extra classes . For instance, schools in Western countries only teach for 6 hours maximum in order to give children spread time to do what they want. Second, parents should create a mentally and physically healthy environment by balance learning and. Parents should spend more time for family activities such as listen to their story about their schooling life, peers and give them solutions, this can leases stress of children brought on by both academic and social burdens. To illustrate, my friend whose good performance at school and social life often have a good care form parents.
To conclude, children nowadays have a tendency to face such pressures form academic, social and commercial perspectives. However, to avoid unexpected consequence, parents should decrease expectation from their children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52887537994 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86435964511 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601823708207 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7860735893 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3529411765 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64705882353 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319223062445 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101515843925 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933943463604 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230618236248 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758015009166 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.