During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job
Dear Mr. Greg,
I am George, not sure if you remember me or not. I am the same guy who sat next to you on the flight from India to Australia on March 01.
We had a small but interesting conversation about the hospitality field. I told you how much I am passionate about working in a hotel line then you offered me your card suggesting to me that I should contact you about a possible job in one of your restaurants.
I was earlier working with the well renowned and the busiest hotel in my region as an Assistant Manager, before this job I was working as a Sales manager in the same hotel. I drop my job for my master's degree from London University and had an internship with them in the same field. I want to apply for the Assistant Manager Profile. The reason for applying for this job is, I have knowledge of the responsibilities of this position also have adequate education and experience as per the profile is concerned. Therefore, I think I am eligible for the profile.
I am appending my Curriculum Vitae with the letter if there are any queries, please contact me on my email or phone. Look forward to working with you.
Yours Sincerely,
George
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...g as a Sales manager in the same hotel. I drop my job for my masters degree from ...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...internship with them in the same field. I want to apply for the Assistant Manager...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46261682243 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70153681479 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57476635514 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7683885913 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5833333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206592311766 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696134982153 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077878260764 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13969626289 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824017823346 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.