Crime is increasing among teenagers. Suggest punishments that can be given.
Indeed, adolescents delinquency is rising which is quite concerning as the young persons are future of any nation. Numbers of evil tasks are being done by youth which have umpteen reasons behind it. However, this essay will discuss suggestion to eradicate issue by penalizing children.
The main reason behind this situation that comes in my mind is influence of peer group. Toddlers usually imitate and copy their friends which leads to involvement in evil things. Though, ill treatment can be in positive way also to solve therefore a social welfare work can be given to an infant. For example, when a young individual gets drugs addicted he usually sends to rehabilitation centres when he gets medical treatment and does welfare work.
Moving towards another cause of this problem, family bonding is significant for nourishment of a juvenile but nowadays due to busy schedules of parents, children are being neglected. Consequently, it is making fearless to youth and they are indulging in atrocities. Whether this hurdle can be resolved either isolating children or removing communication gap between families.
To conclude, at the age of making future it is quite distressing that toddlers attempt bad activities. Hence, penality should be imposed but positively so it cannot put bad impact.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...adolescents delinquency is rising which is quite concerning as the young persons are future of any ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1099.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 207.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30917874396 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82238909151 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4817796214 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.5833333333 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137115681247 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433159932699 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619511667906 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708905375368 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261155027358 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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