Climate change is an urgent issue and it is believed that the utilization of fossil fuels should be stopped and alternative energy resources should be used instead. It is however believed that oil, gas and coal are indispensable. What is your opinion? Support with examples.
The whole world is facing the ill-effects of global warming and resource depletion, necessitating the use of renewable sources of energy. It is argues by some people that oil, gas and coal can never be replaced. In my opinion, their usage should be minimized to the greatest possible extent.
Although, fossil fuels are of great utility for the industries as well as households as they played a huge role in development. For instance, it was due to these fuels that the foremost machinery began to be operated. Moreover, the ease in their availability serves as a big advantage.
However, these fuels have done more harm than good. Excessive utilization of fossil fuels have increased the pollution level manifold, leading to global warming, and therefore, climate change. Additionally, as there is scarcity of these resources without the possibility of replenishment, their supply becomes limited and prices escalated. Along with that, the smoke from these is injurious to health. According to a report, workers in coal mines often suffer from respiratory diseases.
In my view, environment is of greater significance as compared to the industrial growth. Therefore, for ecological sustainability, the usage of non-renewable energy sources should be reduced. Instead, the renewable sources of energy generation such as solar power, tidal, wind should be promoted. Researchers have suggested that these forms are more efficient and cost-effective in the long run. A survey showed that a city which shifted to wind energy was successful in reducing pollution and improving citizen's health.
Conclusively, fossil fuels like coal, gas and oil are advantageous, it is urgent that nature should be taken care of and a move towards healthier forms of energy be made.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38489208633 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02418738371 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597122302158 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4688831607 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11764705882 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288554936682 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786225076118 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810815940317 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164356939225 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824012055674 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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