There are several number of industries which constitutes a government. Although the authority infers economic progression is the vital aspect of the path to development, some people believe that there are other progresses which should be in same position with it. In my opinion, while economic determines the power of the country, it simultaneously links with another progresses.
Firstly, education is one of the essential system in the country’s development. The residents, acquiring knowledge in schools or universities, employs in the country’s economic. Those people run their business which is the beneficial for the stock of the country due to the tax which they pay. So, if people within country are intelligent they can earn money, whereas, they pay taxes too. Furthermore, education system bonds with tourism industry. Having resident who knows foreign language, for instant, can be source of attracting investments. In this situation language helps them to investigate with foreign rich people. So, I think, education can increase country’s currency as well as economic.
Indeed, economic advance is the basement of country’s improvement. Having a developed economy, which guarantees a good life condition, can provide job places. The authority, for instance, can support another structures in order to open new workplaces such as medicine, transportation. In addition, economic development empowers the country’s global position, by increasing export rate. A high level of export of local products, which more expensive price than domestically, provides the country with an increase in salary for workers.
To sum up, while head of the country state aim to economic progress, I think other industries should be included in order to development.
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| 2020-04-05 | Shakhzod Yodgorov | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, well, whereas, while, for instance, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 10.4138276553 10% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61904761905 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10512706003 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652380952381 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.0024488597 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2857142857 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92857142857 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131651807787 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426914750318 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054668684185 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111378118707 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549602731462 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.72 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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