Some people say that it is a waste of time to plan for future. It is more important to focus on present.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is generally argued that organizing tasks for the fore-coming period is an inefficient utilization of time while the present should be seized. While I agree that present should be efficiently spent, future should be kept in view simultaneously.
Undoubtedly, making plans is a time-consuming task and one should enjoy the present situations to the fullest without worrying about the uncertain times ahead. Additionally, plans become futile in events of contingencies and the time spent on their preparation seems to be wasted. Moreover, by being focused in the current period, one can stay productive and derive the maximum benefit from the given circumstances. Unnecessary pondering over the future leads to skip the important events of the present which may result in undesirable outcomes. It is surveyed by health experts that people who remain anxious about future often suffer from depression.
However, one should not remain so engrossed in present that he forgets about the upcoming situations. Drafting a plan for future is a crucial task and has numerous advantages. Predominantly, by writing down the goals one remains highly motivated to accomplish the same. Along with that, people can have a clear vision of how to achieve their targets and hence remain enthusiastic. Further, plans can be edited according to the changing situations and work can be carried out efficiently. For instance, when a student falls sick, he can allot his leisure time for covering that pending work.
Conclusively, seizing the present is important, a combination of having thought about the near future and relishing the present would certainly lead to a delightful and successful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...times ahead. Moreover, by being focused in the moment, one can stay productive and derive the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81354033283 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632478632479 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.4280572382 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.4615384615 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226381202802 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765949824295 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483140598333 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129202032549 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039484774644 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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