In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends.
Why has this change occurred?
Undoubtedly, in ever-progressing era youngsters are admiring friend zones rather than being in the accompany of their parents. This essay asserts that possible causes behind the phenomenon are widened generation gap and technological advancements which are purely accountable for the fluctuation.
Seemingly, process of cognitive development among the young minds is far different than their guardians nowadays that is why, level of abstract thinking suffers contradictions among family members. Whereas, fellow mates do not need to put extra efforts to understand the psychology in peer in comparison of parents. Moreover parents can not rub shoulder with their children in fast moving world that is why young career aspirants prefer to be with pals. To exemplify, as per the research of London University in which students were interviewed from 5 schools replied that almost 10-12 hours they spent with their close friends and shares close relations.
Since, the world is in the state of flux thus, every generation is getting equipped with distinct way of living with passage of time and history has been the evidence of every single occurance. In todays technological oriented world, children are more inclined towards modern gadgets and deploy spare time being on the electronic devices which might be utilised with guardians. Furthermore, they stay connected with age mates through social networking which is easily accessable. It would be biased to overlook that published by UNESCO stating that Facebook platform is majorly being used by minors to find new people around the world.
To conclude, although change is the fundamental rule of nature but such differences can be checked by parents active participation in offspring decisions and inculcate the sense of social bonds from childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ology in peer in comparison of parents. Moreover parents can not rub shoulder with their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1533.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49462365591 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86174176158 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670250896057 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7297015136 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.363636364 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261861754986 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798798963488 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650859024187 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11517040358 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713430690546 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.97 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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