You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mrs Evans,
I am Emma Crixan, a tenant in your building, who rented the furnished studio apartment on the 6th floor. I moved in with my family last week and am writing to express my dissatisfaction over the furnitures of the house.
Firstly, I must mention the rooms have a really enchanting view of the gardens outside which really refreshes the mind. But while unpacking and organising the things in the apartment I found one of the shelves in the TV cabinet is broken and it is glued together with gum. The defect was not visible until I placed my books on them. I have also noticed that two of the chairs in the dining room wobbled dangerously and is unfit for use.
Next week some of our friends are coming to visit us and we would be really delighted if you could send a carpenter before then to fix the problems as the broken chairs specifically may cause an injury if someone accidentally sat on it.
We look forward to hearing the measures you will take.
Yours sincerely
Emma Crixan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...I moved in with my family last week and am writing to express my dissatisfaction o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58791208791 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52149915251 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686813186813 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.1335202172 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7777777778 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150779398618 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547366023415 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466849251919 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728083130216 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474789184997 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.