The table gives information about the underground railway system in 6 countries

Essay topics:

The table gives information about the underground railway system in 6 countries.

The table illustrates, the management of railways which are underneath the ground in six nations.
Overall, London, was the oldest underground railway as well as, it has the longest route in the periods given. The figure in passengers was high in Paris, in contrast to other countries. Kyoto was having the smallest route and amount of passengers a year.
In 1863, London was the first country who built undercover rail which was 394 km of route in which 775million of passenger have travelled. At the start of 1900, a 199km route of railway was built where the passenger population was 1191million in Paris. After twenty seven years a road was built inside the earth in Tokyo, which 55km small than the Paris, but the sum of individuals (1927million) in the 12months were more than the rest of six counties.
Washington Dc was built in 1976 but it have captured only 144million of passengers to travel each year. The smallest routes among the countries were Kyoto and Los Angeles which were made in 1981 and 2001 respectively where the passengers were between 45 million and 50 million correspondingly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 97, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'periods'' or 'period's'?
Suggestion: periods'; period's
...ell as, it has the longest route in the periods given. The figure in passengers was hig...
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-seven
...ulation was 1191million in Paris. After twenty seven years a road was built inside the earth...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... Washington Dc was built in 1976 but it have captured only 144million of passengers ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, well, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91978609626 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73242671227 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572192513369 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0747269146 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0795226461124 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0410685090027 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485088312165 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0660324272449 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418645006191 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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