You recently had a meal in a restaurant in another town. Unfortunately you left your mobile phone in the restaurant. Write a letter to manger, in your letter:
1 Explain what happened
2 Describe your mobile phone
3 Make some suggestions about how you can get your mobile back
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately, I have left my mobile at your restaurant.
Actually on this Monday, I visited London for some business trip and as I have studied my master there, so few of my friend planned for the get to gather in the evening and as your restaurant is extremely renowned and eminent in the area, so we all chose to visit there. Everyone was taking the picture from my mobile phone, because of the superior camera quality, so in hustle and bustle, I have forgotten to take the mobile and it was left on table there. Table no is 6A and our bill no is 34669898.
It was the iPhone of the latest edition of rose gold color, with golden cover and there is small scratch on the left side of the screen. As my flight was on Tuesday morning so I have not left with any time to collect the phone because I have realized the same after reaching the airport and do not left with any time, after reaching my home town I called at my phone. Waiter name John picked the phone and assured me that phone is safe and he has handed over it to the services manager.
I request you to please send the phone by courier and please send me the account number so that I can transfer the charges in the same. Really apologize for the inconvenience caused to you.
Hope to receive my phone soon.
Yours faithfully,
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...e and it was left on table there. Table no is 6A and our bill no is 34669898. I...
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Line 5, column 487, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...able there. Table no is 6A and our bill no is 34669898. It was the iPhone of th...
^^
Line 7, column 470, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...s safe and he has handed over it to the services manager. I request you to please se...
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Line 11, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce caused to you. Hope to receive my phone soon. Yours faithfully, Manind...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1120.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 256.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.375 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28440492456 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55859375 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7139276157 44.8134815571 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.818181818 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.81818181818 4.34317383033 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238176281044 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911513722864 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658932150505 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137689399046 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786514999459 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 70.7449484536 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.42 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.