ou want to sell your television. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
Explain why you are selling the television.
Describe the television.
Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.
Dear Ram,
Hello, I am at pink of my health and hope! you 're sailing at same boat. Gladly, I have been promoted to post of Chief Financial office and transferred to an offshore project. As company has decided to deploy me to its Head quarter based in Canada, thus I am selling out my all belongings.
You know that I bought 56"inch Smart LED of LG Brand on last year. It supports all the multimedia applications through mobile and it can also play high resolution videos such as 4 K videos. Moreover, it is under warranty period which would expire by the end of year 2021.If I talk about its condition, it is just brand new and I've not used it much.
Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV on OLX, but last month you told me to buy a Tv so I aspire to sell it to you. You can come on following Sunday to have a look on this TV. Don't be panic with the mode of payment, you can also remit money in small installments.
Take care and stay healthy.
With warm regards,
Navdeep Puri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...lo, I am at pink of my health and hope! you re sailing at same boat. Gladly, I have...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d transferred to an offshore project. As company has decided to deploy me to its ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...ch would expire by the end of year 2021.If I talk about its condition, it is just ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...its condition, it is just brand new and Ive not used it much. Frankly speaking, ...
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Line 7, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not used it much. Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t much. Frankly speaking, I received several bids regarding this TV on OLX, b...
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Line 7, column 184, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[3]
Message: Did you mean 'watch'?
Suggestion: watch
... can come on following Sunday to have a look on this TV. Dont be panic with the mode...
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Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...owing Sunday to have a look on this TV. Dont be panic with the mode of payment, you ...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the mode of payment, you can also remit money in small installments. Take car...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thy. With warm regards, Navdeep Puri
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, thus, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35602094241 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46638539846 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.717277486911 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8414211967 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3636363636 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120625881266 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398617883524 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416282462168 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0573081015114 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565693510044 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.