Some people prefer to live in a house. While others feel that there are more advantages to live in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
It has been observed since the ages, shelters are obligatored by every human beings to protect themselves from harsh weather and preadiator. In this day and age, there are Immense veraties for survive. Some expert opt houses to live on the other hand some assert that apartment have better choice to live. In addition, personality who claim that advantages outweigh the disadvantage of living in houses, I fremly advocate this opinion. Houses offer ownerships of land as well as privacy.
In present time, mostly wealthy people choose houses to live as they can afford the amount of land as well as construction. Furthermore, houses have huge space compare to flats as one can implement their wish of wast garden and comfort aerea. Similarly, in bungalow people have owned their land as they can reconstruct in future. Moreover, some people do not like disturbance of other people so they have some privacy which maintain in houses.
we all know that every coins has two side, to follow this houses also offer some ill-effect like cultural distance in people. For an example, in bungalows people live in separate area as they are not much include in society. Similarly, other detrimental effect is that houses people have to pay huge maintenance cost.
To conclude, the above view houses is difficult to maintain as well as there is no security as apartment. I fremly advocate that houses are more durable and people can live their private life. I recommended that houses are more comfortable than apartment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, similarly, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02380952381 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59567493047 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575396825397 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.9765706401 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378868612277 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119004937453 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100497730978 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223943621377 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549853728325 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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