TPO 32 integrated
strange noises might have three mutually exclusive sources.
male and female ocra.
giant squids
other submarines
The article asserts that some Russian submarines recorded strange noises and there are different hypotheses about their sources. The teacher completely overthrows all the assumptions mentioned by the author even though she accepts that this phenomenon is debating. In the following, her explanations are discussed thoroughly.
First of all, the reading claims that ocra males and females were the main sources of the noise. However, the professor refutes this idea and says this is highly unlikely even though she thinks it is plausible. She insists that these creatures mostly live near sea surface; therefore, the submarines could not hear them, mainly because they were very deep down the ocean, and the sound of those animals could not reach those submarines.
Secondly, the passage posits that giant squids (a sea predator) were making those sounds. The lecturer rejects this scenario as she refers that first sounds were recorded during 1960's and disappeared after about twenty years surprisingly. Since giant squids have always lived in the area and never leaved there, it is not acceptable to refer to these animals as the sources of the noises owing to the fact that they could not make the noises only for a certain period.
Tertiary, the essay upholds that other countries' submarines were the cause of the noises for they were snicking around the location. Nonetheless, the educator opposes this theory insomuch as she claims that the source moved fast and changed its direction really quickly. Therefore, the sound could not be made by submarines although their engines made some noises and accompanied quackers. Moreover, she acknowledges that those new submarines were constructed by state-of-the-art technologies which enabled them to operate more silently.
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No. of Different Words: 167 150
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Average Word Length: 5.225 4.6
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