Most artists earn low salaries and should therefore recieve funding from the goverment in order for them to continue with their work.
to what extent do you agree?
The majority of art people are paid less thus they need financial support from the governments to be inspired and continue to create magic. I completely disagree with this statement since the art prioritizes pleasure first, then money therefore artists must focus on their favor after to amount of finance they may get.
There are certain specializations, which require much effort before enjoying consequences, in this list art comes first I assume. Artists invest huge amount of time to sharpen their skills in certain directions no matter independent performance or team work, there is only stimulation is making something unique and having joy seeing results. Therefore, authority should create them best opportunities not to feel like fish out of water when they work and provide with latest facilities, as imagination does not like to wait moments. For example, some composers are more successful because of amenities they have in work place while others are behind their shadows due to lack of possibilities to ameliorate their abilities.
Apart from all, surrounding is also crucial in one’s art career since we adapt to environment we are in. Therefore, instead of capitally supporting government better to organize art events inviting composers there in order to be reason having artistic atmosphere and lead them to work together. As an example, we can take into account group musicians as BEATLS, Imagine Dragons since they are able to cover one’s drawbacks or make performance even better than those ones who have solo productions.
I would love to conclude by highlighting non-necessity of funding artists financially, I do believe that giving them what they need we may get better achievements as pleasure is must for them in their prosperity then finance.
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Suggestion: them the best
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Suggestion: with the latest
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Suggestion: those
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, may, so, then, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28169014085 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86935969417 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661971830986 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 36.7805655204 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.0 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196169482241 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705590400843 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514225127205 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118599666095 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426097286512 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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