Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same producuts anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development.
In this modern era, nowadays, people can purchase anything - which are made in other countries: mobiles, toys, food, clothes, and many more. Due to that, nations are becoming more and more similar. I think that, there are many positive development.
To embark, individuals are used to with many other nations' products. There are many countries, which produce many things and import it in another nations. Italy - which is well-known for their clothes; China - popular for technical gizmos: toys, mobiles, smart watches and many more. It improves the globlisation. For an instance, many items of china's mobiles and gadgets are being used by the mankinds in all around the world, it helps to county to increase their GDP - Gross Domestic Product and economy.
Furthermore, national products import to other country, relationship between two nations is improved by it. For an example, India import rice, wheat, and so on to U.S.A - United States of America and USA send their items to India, accordingly, it makes better relationship and bonding. Moreover, many countries celebrate other nation's festival - in some english speaking countries' people celebrate festival of nine nights - India's festival, during that time they buy cultural clothes of India. So, humans can learn and enjoy the culture of other nation.
To recapitulate, many countries send their products to other nation. It is not only increase GDP of nation but also makes better relationship with other country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: A
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33905579399 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6439658764 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600858369099 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4647423868 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8571428571 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6428571429 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120751721553 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502448839474 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763076201087 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08986425628 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0971134626901 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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