Today much of the food people eat gets imported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Today, Due to the urbanization and the reduction of agricultural land, Much of the food we eat comes from farms thousands of miles away,I personally believe that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
The disadvantages of importing food far away from farms is obvious, long distance transport can not guaranteed the freshness of the food,for example, fresh food such as milk and meat are likely to deteriorate during the long distance transport ,if consumers eat this bad food are easy to get sick which is harm for their health.however,there are a number of advantages in long distance transport food.
Firstly,it expanded the scope of consumers choice which will make them happier, Farmer from remote areas, for example, used to be sold locally, but consumers in remote areas did not have enough money to buy so farmers would lose money. But now they can use e - commerce platforms like Amazon and Alibaba to sell agricultural products to city dwellers which will boosting economic incomes.
In short, due to the development of the economy, people's choice of consumption expanded, can eat thousands of miles away from the farm transport food, although the long-distance transport of food may have some quality problems, but whether for consumers with a variety of choices or to increase income of famers,so I think the benefits outweigh the disadwantage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, well, for example, i think, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21818181818 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00984237511 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618181818182 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 20.2975951904 217% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2016806574 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 229.6 106.682146367 215% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 20.7667163134 212% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 7.06120827912 249% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36601038076 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182533538478 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149801287376 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226075044683 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13579737658 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.2 13.0946893788 192% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 11.3001002004 181% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.1190380762 194% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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