Although more and more people read news on the Internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. Do you agree or disagree?
Thesedays, network is an indispensable part of human life due to its convenience, while reading newspapers requires us to buy it manually. However, from my point of view, the top choice of source of information is still newspapers for some following reasons.
Firstly, being written and published by reporters means that newspapers is extremely trustful and reliable, meanwhile internet may not make sure the same thing. it is due to the fact that Internet users can go online and feel free to express their own opinion and voice so the information is subjective and sometimes be distorted. For example, a man who self-introduces as having a close relationship with a member of the government can post on his Facebook that the government is going to increase income tax. it might raise a concern of the citizens about their budget since nobody can confirm his status is whether true or not.
Moreover, newspaper is still irreplaceable as using internet is just easy and accessible for the young people, not the elderly. due to the rapid development of the technology, some older people might find it quite hard to connect to the network or they may need to long hard time to get used to it. Therefore, they might stick to their old style of purchasing and reading newspaper daily to keep up with the current affairs.
All things considered, with the scope of the industry 4.0, internet becomes more popular and common to households but it may not outweigh newspaper immediately. This is because it holds few problems of not providing readers with accurate information and posing a difficulty in using for the old generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 41, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'reporters'' or 'reporter's'?
Suggestion: reporters'; reporter's
...Firstly, being written and published by reporters means that newspapers is extremely trus...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ernet may not make sure the same thing. it is due to the fact that Internet users ...
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Line 3, column 512, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rnment is going to increase income tax. it might raise a concern of the citizens a...
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Line 6, column 129, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Due
... for the young people, not the elderly. due to the rapid development of the technol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97080291971 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8606527614 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616788321168 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.1245812712 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.818181818 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112768602652 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417427169163 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352558323056 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678023779565 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191050691902 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.