Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce this?
There can be no denying that the parental guidance is an integral part in children successful. Nonetheless, many parent put more pressures on their children because of successful and perfection. The possible solutions that the parent can do is to focus on positive things and nurture their children’s interests.
The first reason that children are facing huge stress around academics, social performance and other areas to be successful. Competition for school is tighter than ever, and children are pressured earlier on to do everything right to get into the best school. Take China for an example, failing university exam is considered the most biggest in the student life, therefore children are compelled to access the intensive educational program from the kindergarten as music, art, secondary language. To take this issue, the parent should focus on positive things instead of criticizing which leads the detrimental effects on the kids. Thus, being praised for their achievement, the children can relieve the stress from the school or social aspects and gain more successful than the parent’s expectation.
The pressure to be perfect is also the reason that parent are putting on the kids shoulder.To illustrate, the perfectionist parent are often put high standard and strive for a goal that the kids will never achieve and if their children fail on something, it make them feel like bad parent. For example, Western parenting tries to respect and nuture children’s individualism while Chinese tiger parents believe that arming children with in-demand job skills such as mathematical and scientific proficiency, strong work habits prepares them best for the future and more importantly, they will proud of the kids if they pass the elite universities. To address this problem, parent should give more motivation instead of impose perfectionism on the kids. As the consequence, the children can take their parent as good trait, release high tension,freely develop their own talent.
In a nutshell, there is no doubt that the expectations and the standards that parent put on their kids is not bad, but instead of forcing the kids for flawless performance, guiding and motivating are better solution that parent can do with the kids.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'biggest' (without 'most') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: biggest
...iling university exam is considered the most biggest in the student life, therefore children...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...parent are putting on the kids shoulder.To illustrate, the perfectionist parent ar...
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Line 3, column 258, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...if their children fail on something, it make them feel like bad parent. For example,...
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Line 3, column 841, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , freely
...rent as good trait, release high tension,freely develop their own talent. In a nuts...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1895.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3081232493 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87403967294 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546218487395 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6164122072 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.769230769 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148152162825 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068500420004 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040987890744 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0955590055743 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628107499145 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.