Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using facebook as a means of online instruction.
Due to the rapid spread of pandemic coronavirus, all the Vietnamese schools and institutions are driven to be temporarily closed. However, it seems that this mishap could not stop instructors and learners from imparting and obtaining knowledge thanks to online instruction via social networking sites like Facebook. In my point of view, that teachers and students work on Facebook presents both benefits and drawbacks.
On the one hand, Facebook provides teachers and students with numerous merits. First, it is convenient that learners and teachers can work from home during this crisis-ridden period to avoid getting exposure to the virus. They can also enjoy the time working in their own rooms without having the possibility of going out in the extreme weather and being stuck in traffic congestion. Moreover, teaching and learning through Facebook is cost-saving since there is no need to spend on accommodation , transportation and eating outside. Additionally, some subjects such as Physical Education and some extracurricular activities do not requires online instruction, which gives students more spare time to engage in their favorite interests or learn new soft skills.
On the other hand, using Facebook as a mean of online instruction appears not to be an actually good measure as it brings ample drawbacks. One of the most disadvantageous sides of this kind of distance education is the diminution in productivity. Both learners and instructors are unable to interact with each other on Facebook effectively because they are limited by the fluctuation of Internet connection which does not occur when they work in class. They also cannot stay concentrate well as working for hours in front of their computers’ or smartphone screen. Furthermore, studying on Facebook may distract students from their learning since they are tempted by many other things such as surfing the Internet or watching films. They also tend to spend more time enjoying rather than dealing with their assignments because they are not constrained by class regulations and being monitored by their lecturers. Gradually, they are likely to be exhausted with piles of homework and have a big gap of knowledge.
To sum up, although Facebook is beneficial to teachers and students in this challenging situation, it is undeniable that its obstacles outweigh its advantages, and that it could not never substitute teaching and studying in class. However, it is better for students to adapt to various ways of learning including distance learning as well as set good self-discipline and self-study so that they can keep up with their study progress in any circumstance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, kind of, such as, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2236.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33651551313 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00356553045 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551312649165 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 668.7 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4824258936 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.529411765 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6470588235 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138242347378 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475242733996 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070435866655 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081686788856 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439343874591 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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