The maps show the changes of a community center 10 years ago and until the present
The two maps show alterations in the layout of a community center over 10 years.
Overall, it can be seen that the community center has been significantly reconstructed and renovated after ten years, while some minor features witnessed no change.
In the central part of this building, the 100-seat hall, which accounts for the biggest area, remains unchanged over the ten-year period. A toilet has been added to its north, making the adjacent storage room shrink by half. To the west of this center, the garden has been demolished to make way for an indoor sports faciltiy, whereas the parking lot stays intact.
Looking at the map in more detail, four office rooms and the storage room have been replaced with a coffee area. While the working area has been relocated to the orginal spot of the coffee place, the storage room has been completely demolished. Finally, the southern entrance and reception area and the kitchen on the southeast of the building are kept untouched.
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- The table below gives information about the use of different modes of transport in Shanghai in 1996, and one possible projection (high motorization scenario) for their use in 2020.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. 78
- 5 There are more workers to work from home and more students to study from home This is because the computer technology is more and more easily accessible and cheaper Do you think it is a positive or negative development 84
- The availability of entertainment such as video games on handheld devices are harmful to individual and to the socity they live in To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Nowadays museums have become more and more important What are the purposes of places such as museums and how should they be funded 69
- 8 The chart below shows male and female fitness membership between 1970 and 2000
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 824.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99393939394 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50289089053 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2794477682 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137319642137 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663966055199 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105056962923 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120067772273 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126316056114 0.0819641961636 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.