Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have just sent you some holiday photos.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
Thank them for the holiday and the photos
Explain why you didn't write earlier
Invite them to come and stay with you
Hi Tom and Emily,
Just received the pictures from last months’ trip and I’ve to say they look fabulous. They brought back all the wonderful memories of the time spent with you guys at Tom’s house.
I’m truly thankful for your hospitality and for sending the lovely pictures. I had an absolute blast during my time down under with both of you and couldn’t have hoped for a better overseas vacation.
I’m sorry I couldn’t write to you earlier. I was tied up with the work project I’d talked to you about. The deadline ended up being brought forward and as a result I have been really busy these past couple of weeks.
My birthday is coming up next month and I will be delighted if you could come over and celebrate it with me. This will also be a good opportunity for you to enjoy some milder weather as I know it is quite hot in Australia right now. Of course, I insist that you stay with us, there is plenty of room and it will make me really happy to host you.
Best wishes,
John Doe
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ped for a better overseas vacation. I’m sorry I couldn’t write to you earlier...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... sorry I couldn’t write to you earlier. I was tied up with the work project I’d t...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4414893617 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20458671418 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686170212766 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.189778163 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303630031518 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106598923687 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581617246399 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170444260311 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238270481433 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.