More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
In the recent years, many people are migrating to cities to find a better life, but living in cities is not easy as they think. There are a lot of drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my view, government could make urban life become better by some solutions.
Living in the city is a dream of almost all people because it offers to them more jobs and modern services as health care, entertainment.However, living in the city has some difficulty. Firstly, the cost of living is higher than in rural. Because of high standard living, people have to pay higher prices for housing, transportation and food. Another issue is that inhabitants who live in the city tend to suffer from crime rates or traffic jam day by day, Furthermore, the quality of the air or water is not clean and fresh, which is affected by smoke from transportation or factories.This phenomenon can lead to respiratory diseases.
Nevertheless, government could apply some solutions to deal with these problems. First of all, they should develop the rural areas by investing and building more factories or companies to create more jobs for people to reduce amount of people leaving their hometown to seek job. Secondly, they should raise awareness of inhabitants and encourage them to prioritize to use public mean of transportation to limit air pollution and traffic congestion. Finally, penalizing crime strictly is also one of the ways to improve city life. It can reduce crime rate and have a peaceful life.
In brief, living in the city has both negative and positive sides.However, I believe that the government should find out the best methods to improve the quality of the urban area as well as rural area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in brief, as well as, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 5.05154639175 257% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 26.3917525773 171% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 288.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88541666667 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91020903843 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 127.690721649 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 290.88556701 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6991578107 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5384615385 4.34317383033 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383714399601 0.216113520407 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124909079628 0.0766984524023 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101446375538 0.0603063233224 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228419622276 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114444883088 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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