The pros and cons of the current pandemic - COVID-19
It is just the beginning of the Lunar New Year, but there are so many natural disasters have occurred on the Earth. The worst is the Coronavirus pandemic (COVID-19). It has broken out immensely on more than 200 countries and regions in the world, and caused many challenges for humankind as well as brought to us some good news.
Firstly, COVID-19 has caused more than 42.000 deaths and infected more than 859.000 people on over the world. The WHO has had to announce the highest alert level for people to try to prevent infection from this virus. The fast-spreading of Coronavirus is hurting the world's economy, especially lowering production and limiting travel not only in Vietnam but also in most of the countries affected by this virus. The economy in the world becomes more and more stagnant. This hazardous virus also affects the education because instead of coming back to school and continue to study at school, almost of students have to stay at home and try to adapt to online- learning on the Internet. The life among citizens has been reversed since the day COVID-19 broken out. Besides, the price of the mask can compare with gold. For example, my Cambodian companion messaged to me that a box of masks probably cost 95$ for 100 masks. Fortunately, the government in Vietnam has banned the law about this problem in time to provide for the citizens a stable price of masks.
Secondly, everything has its upside and downside. Although this virus is extremely dangerous, the government in many countries has given various policies to protect the citizens and cooperate with other countries to stop the spreading of this virus. In some border disputes, they tried to stop the war and give a hand to fight against the virus in the medical battle. In Vietnam, when the farmers are anxious about the enormous of goods that cannot export, they are various industries and enterprises create some innovations to help them sell the agricultural product. The whole world seems like a union together to help others come over this havoc. In education, this is the precious time for student to study by himself or herself, and they can review the lessons as well as find out a new way to study effectively. Moreover, this is a suitable time to enhance the awareness of people about how important health is. Trying to take care of ourselves, realizing many bad routines, paying more attention to the hygiene routine, and trying to stay healthy are many other upsides. One more good news about the hole in the Ozone layer is recovering through the quarantining time of almost countries.
To sum up, we cannot deny many downsides this virus has caused for people, it has threatened the lives of a tremendous amount of people and caused many effects on all sides of humankind's life. Nevertheless, the determination of many people and the power of the union of many countries in the world will force this pandemic to stop and we will come over this challenging time. One more time, the world will be better after this tough time, the mental power of mankind will be the wonderful weapons to fight against this virus.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 90.0 41.998997996 214% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2582.0 1615.20841683 160% => OK
No of words: 537.0 315.596192385 170% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80819366853 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52524403359 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 800.1 506.74238477 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 16.0721442886 149% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8346563336 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.583333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0572586109 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0275869100024 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812075388741 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0496337354569 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449382702602 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 78.4519038076 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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