You are studying a short course in another country Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider There is a major problem with accommodation Write a letter to the course provider In your letter Say what the problem is Describe the accommodation y

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You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:
Say what the problem is.
Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting.
Ask the provider to solve the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ruchi and I am attending a 2-month course organized by you in Ireland. I am writing to request your support to find me another accommodation as I am facing a problem with my current apartment.
As the place where I am situated right now is far away from the coaching center, daily traveling is a challenge for me. This is because classes usually start at 9:00 am and there is no means of public transport available at this time, and private cabs are too pricey.
As a matter of fact, I wished to get a home that is at just walking distance from the learning center as it would save both my time and money.
In view of the above situation, I would request you to please look for a living place on the premises of the center which should also be within the same budget as that of the house I am living in now.
I am hoping for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Ruchi Verma

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 96, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to center'
Suggestion: to center
...just walking distance from the learning center as it would save both my time and money...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, as a matter of fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32558139535 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45268916775 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633720930233 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0842490764 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.375 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119400384666 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579912954708 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688868926435 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613783025014 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865424558394 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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