Doing which activity do you think can better help you strengthen the friendship between you and your friend?
-having a good time together with your friend
-solving your friend’s problem with him or her
People use several ways to improve the friendship between them and their friends. While some people spend a good time together with their friends, some make solutions for their friends’ problems with them. It is so controvertible for people to make the decision to enhance friendship with their friends. In my view, people who take a good with their friends definitely acquire some benefits such as establishing unforgettable memories, sharing their hobbies, and talking about their background.
To begin with, people will obtain unforgettable memories when they share a good time with their friends. Generally speaking, if people want to feel happiness or fun with their friends, they choose the solution to go on a trip somewhere. As a result, this action makes their friendship more sophisticated. For example, my friend decided on his trip with me to go to Tokyo Disney Land. On this trip, we could spend almost all day of the trip with each other, and share our happiness for this place. Thus, this trip built unforgettable memories between us. Moreover, it surely made our friendship better.
Secondly, sharing hobbies in between people and their friends construct their advanced friendship. People normally hold their various hobbies. These are sometimes similar to their friends. Thus, they will be capable of being highly friends if they have the chance of sharing their interests with each other. Hence, their friendship is gradually getting better than in the past.
Finally, the opportunity to talk about the background with friends is a chance for brushed friendship. When people talk about their episodes since their childhood with their friends, they sometimes get more attention to their friends. Take myself an example, I experienced to get the championship of swimming competition in my home town when I was six years old. I had a friend who joined a swimming club in high school, but we continued to quarrel with each other at first. On the other hand, we have been the best friend since I talked about that I got the championship in the contest for him.
To sum up, people should spend a good time with their friends for their developed relationships between them. I certainly believe that they can attain splendid memories of them, share their interests, speak about background each other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, such as, talking about, as a result, in my view, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11842105263 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66595832582 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497368421053 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 545.4 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2684277693 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5652173913 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91304347826 5.45110844103 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171544461824 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695369078242 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516600046887 0.0737576698707 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122598854701 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124485572383 0.0645574589148 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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