Most people prefer popular fun activities rather than visiting museums. Why? Use examples and details in your answer.
In this date and age, with the modernization of the world, the ways people think and their bobby had dramatically changed and totally divorced from the infancy of technology. And the fact that many exciting activities take the priority over the tour to visit the museum is stood out. In this essay, I will discuss clearly about the reasons resulted in this issue.
First and foremost, many adorable activities usually suit the taste of participator. People are now demanding for such things that would probably help them to unwind after a long time working nonstop rather than booking a boring experience to the museum which I suppose might drive them to crazy. Addition, most people, therefore, love to partake in and seek for a place that is appealingly adorned unlike the boredom reflected by museum’s appearance. As an ample evidence for this, a research of VietNamnet points out that the proceeds of a museum a day is immensely low and even all but nonexistent.
Nevertheless, another cause of the absent lack of participation in museum is the fact that it is no more suitable and appealing to children, teenager and even elderly. With the breakthrough in the quality of lives, people are now familiar with the images that bring fun to them and extremely fed up with the figure which is full of dullness that museums bring. Sad as it is, the icon of museums is fading expressionless in human lives.
In conclusion, there is an eclectic mix of activities that is chosen above the tour to museums. Thus, all of us should take the image of museum into the daily life to spur everybody’s interest of its to make contribution to preserve the rewarding meaning of museums in our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1405.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82817869416 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75433358389 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.771608197 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.083333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171676913093 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542634181375 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321073478019 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918988235644 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0215956335213 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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