Some people agree with spending lots of money on large wedding, while others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both views
In all times wedding has been the most important event for every person. However, currently some part of society believe that, it is absolutely perfect to spend abundant money on weddings, while others state that wasting huge sums on such ceremonies is useless. This essay will discuss both views and provide some evidences to reinforce these statements.
On the one hand, huge wedding ceremonies are fascinating and enjoyable appealing for all the guests. It means that, this event provides numerous contests and amusement. Therefore, this marriage assembly is an excellent pastime for a husband and wife with all guests including their parents and close friends. For example, on this event the friend of the husband and friend of the wife can meet each other and maybe in the remote future it will entail them to commence dating. Thus, this ceremony is an incredibly suitable place to meet new friends or to initiate dating with someone.
On the other hand, in marriage ceremonies there are no common sense to waste enormous amount of money for the family who just has married. In other words, a family offers a lot for their guests, due to the fact that they really crave to celebrate this occasion. For instance, they purchase food products, renting a special venue usually located outside from the city, also hiring luxury cars, everything costs money, and of course it is exorbitantly expensive. Hence, this event is a total waste of money for some useless activities such as celebrations with guests and family.
To conclude, this essay has discussed both points of view regarding spending enormous amount of money on a marriage party and provided some facts that confirm every opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, of course, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06761565836 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46318879633 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594306049822 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8872023206 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.538461538 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1538461538 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259294579737 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904371793813 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075700920768 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181125630128 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841711205245 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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