Some people think that cars are best way to travel in a city while other think that bicycle is better.discuss both view and give your opinion?
In the comtemprary era , transportation is boon in human life. Therefore , everyone have distint mind set notion regardimh travelling because some people ponder that migrate one place to another using cars are effective way but other aclaim that bicycle is effective for travel purpose.In this essay I will elucidate both view before reaching to final conclusion.
To commence with point of view four wheeler supporter , It is convenient for commutor to cover long distance within short time.Secondly , cars preserve us during worse weather condition such as rainy day.For instance , In india during summer temprature must be higher level , so masses can travel without any problem to destination.Thirdly , people can carry huge necessity things and also travel near about five person through car.Additionally , only car provide high level facilties such as radio , cooling etc.But there have few cons like traffic should increase and accident can be happened due to congestion. Further more , car revealed toxic gases that can be harmful for environment.
On the flip side of those viewer who thought that two wheeler are more helpful as compared to other transport.It has multifarious benefits to person , they should be physically fit and fine. Secondly , pollution should be reduce because bicycle run by padels rather then diesel and petrol , does not release harmful gases to environment.Thirdly , dweller can easily move to particular place of city. For instance , some problem occured during parking of four wheeler, that matter automatically solved if people travel by bicycle as well as congestion problem on road should be mitigated.Moreover , by using bicycle two person can travel and also during rain and hotter season commutor should be face few difficulties.
To recapitulate , I thought that both have own importance and no one can irrefutable its benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in short, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43944636678 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07836892656 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660899653979 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.817135104 49.4020404114 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.5 106.682146367 184% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.125 20.7667163134 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.125 7.06120827912 228% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 5.01903807615 677% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154762921899 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624496257168 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619224717194 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970869658448 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057162873685 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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