The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
Over the years, people have been debating about huge influence of global web in our life. Some communities establish firm opinion that network demonstrates unlimited base of useful information while others prefer talk about negative effects of modern technology. This essay will discuss various benefits as well as drawbacks of the above mentioned statement.
Firstly, humanity can receive information from any point in the world and also not to take a bunch of books in a bag, whereas to take everything from one global source. At the moment smartphone plays a crucial role in being of every inquisitive person we may ask any question in the search bar and catch the necessary information. For example, giant of information called google contains tips from A to Z therefore society discount others application. Nowadays, because of the phenomenon of worldwide communication, we may easily print our accumulated experience of knowledge filling the electronic library for the future generations. By the way, resources of Wikipedia still difficult to estimate due to the vast amount of availably information. Thus, society holds in hands a huge source of knowledge and sometimes does not think about it.
On the other hand, the electronic brain has negative aspects and in some cases is inferior to material sources of information. Besides, cyberspace has many inaccuracies compared to books, which is proven by time. For instance, according to the statistics of Metro magazine, more than 70% of information on the Internet is false and is created to raise huge scandals in the world. Unfortunately, in our developed time, not all parts of the world have access to wi-fi and some of the nations use libraries, spending several years trying to search the right information. In this case, nepalese use ancient manuscripts to realize the necessary education about being, which is not always convenient. Hence, the network industry often has a negative impact on the world around us and many of the population still unavailable to it.
All in all, technical progress will always have two sides of the coin where there is a place for both the dissatisfied and the community that supports it. Probably, everyone can make the right decision for themselves and develop in the right direction
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... from A to Z therefore society discount others application. Nowadays, because of the p...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s of the world have access to wi-fi and some of the nations use libraries, spending several...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, by the way, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1972972973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87937300415 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0509490033 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.117647059 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129478196011 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344378099831 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273032459562 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656446935289 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194601418711 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
... from A to Z therefore society discount others application. Nowadays, because of the p...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 471, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s of the world have access to wi-fi and some of the nations use libraries, spending several...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, as well as, by the way, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1972972973 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87937300415 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 176.041082164 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0509490033 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.117647059 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129478196011 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344378099831 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273032459562 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656446935289 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194601418711 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.