Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involved in their children's education than parents were in the past.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Education is the passport for the future, for tomorrow belong to those who prepare for it today. Although some people would harbor the view that parents nowadays not concerned about children's education as compared to the past, I believe that parents today are deeply involved in their children's study than in the past . I had a firm belief that parents are more concerned about children's education for number of reasons, and would develop my ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, today's education is more complicated as compared to the past. Earlier, teachers used to teach students only with the help of books. Whereas, nowadays theoritical and parcatical knowledge are combined in a curriculam, which means that along with a study from books, experiments concerning science and technology are conducted to stimulate the real life situation. As a result, parents need to continuously monitor their children's learning progress. I must admit that my experience on this matter is profoundly influenced by my own experience. For example, my father explained me that when he was in grade nine, he theoritically learned the difference between organic and inorganic compouds during chemistry class but he never visualized the same. In contrast, while stuyding the similar topic in my class about different chemical composition, we experienced their physcial appearances such as color and texture of chemicals. In addition, we generally received an ample of homework, where I needed a help from my father who is an assistant professor in a government laboratory. As we can see from this experience, it is vital for parents to involve in student's studies.
Secondly, nowadays, the education system is expensive, which means that parents need to finance and jointly decide along with their children about their study plan. In case, any child wants to travel abroad for his or her study, he needs to spend high fees on his tution fees including an accomodation and food charges which cost around fifty thousand Euros. Consequently, parents involvement is unavoidable. Drawing from my nephew's experience, who recently travelled to Australlia for pursuing Master in Business Administration. In order to complete his study of two years, he needed approximately sixty thousand australlian dollars, where his famly contributed a major portion of amount and the same time supported him to select his subjects for specialization.For this reason, parents involvement today in children's education is inevitable so that student can be supported with sufficient finances.
In view of the reasons mentioned, I firmly propose the involvement of parent's in children's education. This is because nowadays studies are complicated, and further, joint efforts are required to send the students abroad for their studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in contrast, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 8.0752688172 310% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2373.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39318181818 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99766209982 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565909090909 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 734.4 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5699025084 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.894736842 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.10526315789 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255467292591 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938465829813 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898798456129 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172427027552 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507530174985 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 86.8835125448 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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