You recently took a trip to another city, and you had a plan to visit your friend who is living there. However, you couldn’t see him/her. Write a letter to your friend, and say
apologize for not being able to meet.
Give your reasons.
Suggest how you can meet some other time.
Dear Kamal,
How are you? I am afraid to inform you that I won’t be able to join you at your place this weekend as I injured my knee and had to urgently return to my home.
Well to be honest, I know how excited you were when you came to know that I will be staying at your place and had been planning to visit the local delicacies during my stay. However, when I was training for the marathon, a cyclist hit me in the back and I fell on my knee which fractured my ligaments. Since, the doctor suggested getting it checked from a neurosurgeon I had to take a flight back to my house.
Nevertheless, don’t worry about the injury as my personal doctor has assured me that it is completely recoverable and suggested me to take a rest for a week.
That being said, as I have a meeting coming up in Bangalore next month, so we can catch up on 31st of June because it is a Saturday, I believe you will be able to make time for the meet.
Therefore, I hope you won’t stay mad at me for long and reschedule for our get together. Catch up with you soon. Take care.
With love,
Mark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 302, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...n my knee which fractured my ligaments. Since, the doctor suggested getting it checke...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...up with you soon. Take care. With love, Mark
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1320754717 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4021617178 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580188679245 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.4685841872 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291288683573 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105607226276 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886502254868 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163005861611 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803593752513 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.