Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people
prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use
specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays one of best favorites of peoples is going to restaurant. For this reason, many restaurants are built all over the cities. However, some people prefer to prepare and eat their food at home. Although my desire is to make and eat food at home, I think that sometimes going to restaurant is very interesting. I will explore my opinion in the following with more details.
In restaurants, we are not sure about quality of foods. In restaurants, in order to make food faster and more delicious, too much oil, cheese, sauce is used. Those materials are very harmful for our body and many diseases such as some type of cancers stems from consuming those materials.
Furthermore, cooking at home is very enjoyable for me. I am a computer engineer and most of time, I am working with my computer. In order world, this is not a physical activity. So, I compensate this shortage by cooking food for myself. I have a book which is about how to make Italian food and sometimes I prepare my food from that book. That is very fantastic experiences.
I admit that I really like cooking a home. Nevertheless, I think that once or twice a month, going to different restaurants are very entertaining. You always don’t have enough time to make food at home. Sometime you are too busy or even don’t tired. In this situation going to restaurant is a good option. It is very relaxing to order whatever you want, and you order is prepared after a short period.
Overall, I believe that making food a home is healthier and very enjoyable especially for someone like me who doesn’t have enough physical activities during a day. However, for some situations that you are busty or tired, going to restaurant is a very good solution.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the best'.
Suggestion: of the best
Nowadays one of best favorites of peoples is going to restau...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, really, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 5.60731707317 713% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 303.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71287128713 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70556619666 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 106.607317073 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518151815182 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 283.868780488 163% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 1.53170731707 979% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 8.94146341463 246% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9153386787 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.9090909091 112.824112599 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.7727272727 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 3.70975609756 297% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266699240807 0.215688989381 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782209648507 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116648387466 0.0843802449381 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149673466382 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112304078764 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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