Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your music-related activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your music-related activities
Dear Mr Mathew,
I enjoyed your vibrant and brilliant performance on 17th September in the Army Golf Stadium and this was one of the best live concerts I have ever been to. I was mesmerised with your music, performance and songs and I must convey my utmost gratitude for your dazzling performance. You were simply outstanding.
I am a university student and my major is architecture. Besides, I am a huge fan of music and a member of our university music team. In the team, I mostly play the drums and violin apart from writing some lyrics occasionally. Moreover, I have started learning to play the guitar and I find it quite amusing. I wish to start my own music band after finishing my studies and you have been one of my idols so far.
I am wondering if it would be possible for you to offer me some tips in playing the guitar. I also want to discuss some issues about writing lyrics as you are also an outstanding lyricist. I am hoping you would spare some of your precious time for me.
Thank you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Rick Barlow
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...fer me some tips in playing the guitar. I also want to discuss some issues about ...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s you are also an outstanding lyricist. I am hoping you would spare some of your ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 872.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54166666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64246833262 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5018810287 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0769230769 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7692307692 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251075785121 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904398658449 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581855243695 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150528053646 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454609530341 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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