Some people think that it is fine for professional sportsmen and sportswomen to misbehave on or off the field, as long as they play well. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?
Can the behavior of the public figures affect the lifestyle of impressionable children? As a matter of fact, more often than not, it is suggested by many a man that sportspersons have the right to show poor manners in society, owing to their performance in the game and the success which is followed. I completely disagree with the idea because athletes are considered to be the role model of the young generation and while seeing their role model acting rude to the society will encourage them to behave in a similar manner.
Arguably, the superstar athletes are not expected to be on their best behavior for no reason. In the contemporary era, since the children try to imitate their favorite sports player and tend to replicate their manners and attitude, the players must act responsibly so that the adolescents learn their sportsmen’s spirit rather than their bad habits. For instance, in a painstaking research by Harvard University, it was revealed that, despite the best efforts done by cricket players trying to control their anger on the field, 4 out of 10 children started showing their rage in their peer group.
Notwithstanding the darker side, the opponents opine that the conduct shown by the players on the field not only tries to become intimidating, but also gives them the courage to believe that they are superior from the other team. Although it is not entirely untrue however, the nature of the player affects the gullible minds of the children. For example, no sooner did the Ministry of India performed a survey on the reasons for the rise in delinquency in children, than it was unfolded that the unprofessional behavior of the athletes was at the top of the list.
To conclude, but for any doubt, players being the role model of the younger generation must control their emotions at all times. However, if the anger is channelized by the sports player in their performance, it would lead to a socially stable and morally prosperous society; lest good outcomes should be far out of reach.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a similar manner" with adverb for "similar"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'painstaking research'.
Suggestion: painstaking research
...than their bad habits. For instance, in a painstaking research by Harvard University, it was revealed ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1680.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89795918367 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7410581951 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568513119534 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.0499050703 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.727272727 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1818181818 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0576266258348 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228447129122 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189973616001 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0355624902508 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152525452964 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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