Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society.
Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.
In our today’s era, there has been an ongoing debate among people who support the complying of death penalty to violent crimes and those who strongly oppose this ultimate punishment. Although many people consider it ethically unacceptable penalty in contemporary society, I believe that it still plays an essential role in maintaining social order and safety.
In one hand, I accept that capital punishment exposes a number of demerits. First, it creates a contradiction between respecting and depriving the inherent right to life of human being. No one is legally entitled to take other people’s lives even with authority. Moreover, there would be the possibility of condemning innocent civilians to death. Further, giving retribution to felons by execution is nothing more than the act of a criminal murdering others.
On the other hand, I opt for the executing of capital sentence to those who commit serious offence because of its ample merits. That culprits receive death penalty can directly deters them from committing crimes or escaping from prison. In addition, the costly expense budgeted on imprisonment can be economized and invested for other more essential areas such as education and public health. More importantly, the fear of being under sentence of death will psychologically restrain people from committing criminal behaviours, and consequently decreases the rates of felonies.
In a nutshell, there is no objective assertion of whether capital punishment is morally and illegally right or not. Despite of its disadvantages, I still advocate applying this kind of harsh punishment in eliminating criminal offence to keep the society secure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, still, in addition, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47286821705 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96205192011 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2307692308 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.615384615 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.61538461538 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333252983272 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904573236259 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610343979245 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165257729854 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688666126707 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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