Many people now are still buying products in outdoor markets. Many people think that shopping in supermarkets is much better.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this ?
Write an essay to educated readers to say whether you agree or disagree with the idea that shopping in supermarkets is good for people today.
In the modern society, although many people prefer shopping in supermarkets, the traditional way of shopping in outdoor markets among others still remains. In my opinion, the aforementioned types of shopping both have their own advantages.
On the one hand, the majority of today's shoppers find shopping in supermarkets more favorable since it brings them ample benefits. Firstly, the shopping space makes it comfortable for customers while they are looking for their goods because it is cleaner and fresher than that in outdoor markets. Buyers also feel free to decide what to purchase without being invited with insistence by the retailers. Moreover, convenience is one of the convincing reason for many people to opt for the modern type of shopping. The orderly and systematic arrangement of every kind of products in supermarkets allows customers to find their stuff or compare the price among products in the same category easily. Also, there are a number of shopping carts that are available for them to carry what they buy.
On the other hand, shopping in outdoor markets is still the ultimate choice for certain shoppers because of an array of reasons. First, products in outdoor market cost cheaper as buyers do not need to pay for the taxes and service like when they shop in supermarket. Another potential explanation for the good sides of purchasing goods in outdoor market is that customers have a right to bargain and offer more feasible price for the products they want to buy. Further, it is believed that shopping in outdoor market enables buyers to save more time. Unlike the ideal atmosphere in supermarket that tempts people to spend more time window shopping and purchasing more things, the stifled and hustle space in outdoor market encourages shoppers to quickly get their needed stuff to get out of the crowd as soon as possible.
To sum up, the fact that modern type of shopping cannot utterly substitute the traditional one proves the particular role of each in the society. Therefore, it seems impossible to consider which one outweighs the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, kind of, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1735.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0583090379 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63715798713 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530612244898 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7927259302 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192421320112 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687455958586 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451251936771 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113586912232 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582014831607 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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