People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do they sleep less? What effect does it have on an individual and on society?
In many countries, people have started sleeping less than they used to. In my opinion, I believe that getting minimum sleep is owing to hectic work schedules for some and entertainment for others.
Firstly, the prominent reason that many people get less sleep nowadays than they used to get previously is due to their work schedule. In other words, to keep up with the deadlines of projects at work, many people get work home to complete their projects on time, thus working late at night. This has now become a very common scenario for many working-class people to use extra time which they need at work from their night hours and hence sleeping for a few hours.
Another factor that is adding to this sleep debridement in a lot of countries is entertainment. As people are busy with their work whilst the day, they need some sort of relaxation from the stress in their daily life, so many entertainment sources are available, such as night clubs, casinos, cinemas and many more. As a result of these night clubs and casinos, many people utilize their night hours dancing and gambling and thus using their time in entertainment at night rather than sleep.
Lack of sleep has a detrimental effect on individuals as well as society. The individuals with insomnia are always at many health risks, and some of the immediate effects being laziness, lethargy, disinterest, and lack of concentration which is harmful to them as well as society. For instance, a person with sleep problems can be dangerous while driving, as he cannot concentrate on the signals as well as the intersection and thus, being a threat to his life as well as others on the road.
In conclusion, sleeping for fewer hours can be very dangerous for the health of the individual and can bring catastrophic effects on society as the lack of concentration and awareness of their surroundings so, can be a problem for others too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, sort of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83486238532 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70922469302 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.3556681831 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.75 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262805964855 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128478554952 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101347224347 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157832816589 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630279312917 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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