Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits?
Do you agree or disagree?
It is considered by some that new technology is more problematic than beneficial. In my opinion, I believe that all innovation has pros and cons, be it in the modern era or past, but innovations ought to be used in moderation.
On the one hand, the new inventions have made our lives easier in this busy world, without them it is really hard to compete and get a job done. Firstly starting from the household jobs which took a lot of time and energy before, such as, cooking, doing dishes, cleaning and washing clothes, but now with all the machinery, for instance, cooking pots, dishwashers, cleaners, and washing machines, the life is easier and manageable. However, modern technology has detrimental effects on our health, due to sedentary lifestyle
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On the other hand, innovations come with a cost, but if used in moderation will benefit everyone. Machines are an integral part of people’s lives today and are used in every routine of the day, for instance, for daily commute to work, people mostly travel by car, although it is easier, at the same time causes air pollution and if everyone uses it for transportation, the world will get polluted soon and will have an environmental hazard, but if people prefer public transport for commuting, less carbon dioxide will be released in the air and will limit air pollution.
In conclusion, I think it is always beneficial to use technology but there should be a limitation to its usage. Thus the usage of technology in moderation is a key to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86486486486 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82294068001 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617760617761 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.49900398 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7777777778 20.7667163134 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5555555556 7.06120827912 206% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124666405704 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052594784742 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511550684912 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717784999559 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640082724407 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.5 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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