Today, many people do not realize how important the natural world is. Why is this? How can people learn more about the importance of the natural world?
Humanity is ignoring the importance of nature in these massive production years. I personally believe that urbanization is the root of this negligence and strict rules or epidemic outbreaks can give insights to the population of this planet.
In the past, people lived friendly with nature appreciating all of its value whereas urban centers are magnetizing people from a rural background in which we forget how necessary forests and wild animals are. To be more specific, modern choices of living have caused people to move into urban spots where they are able to live their dream life with luxury. For example, individuals who live in cities are not only provided with gas, electricity and drinking water but also security, job opportunities as well as modern architecture that adds awe to their lives. In contrast, nature itself supported people with those facilities which were time-consuming. Therefore, the natural world is being forgotten by most people who left their origin which has been turned into cities.
Of course, life in cities is really fast and the majority of people do not have enough time to consider the significance of the natural world. However, there are two primary methods that are able to explain the role of nature. Firstly, governments can impose strict regulations towards individuals then they will have to take care of trees and birds in cities which may remind of nature’s significance. Moreover, they should take the initiative of multiplying green zones in city centers. Secondly and even more importantly, diseases can teach life lessons about the importance of wildlife. For example, every five years the planet is witnessing epicenters where viruses take the life of the population. This is because cities have been built on habitats of the natural world in which nature tries to fight against its land.
In conclusion, it is true that nowadays most people forget the leading role of the natural world since they possess little amount of time to think about it. Although it is so, authorities, as well as nature itself, have the power to make those people learn about the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, of course, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10256410256 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67294473686 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2263262826 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.9375 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9375 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343482079063 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0987413062998 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750825625207 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198552719915 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352491065772 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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