In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. Cashless society seems to be a reality, and how realistic do you think?
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Nowadays, whether cashless society has become a reality has attracted numerous controversies and drawn the attention of the public. Personally, I am more inclined towards cashless will be inevitable in the near future. This essay will be discussing both merits and demerits and lead to a plausible conclusion.
In many advanced countries around the world, cashless society is already a common phenomenon, many stores either accept credit card, Apple Pay or Google Pay. The biggest advantage of cashless society would be the convenience. In the traditional way of payment, you would need to take out your wallet and pay for the item and you may end up with excessive coins in your wallet. With cashless payment, all you need is your phone or a credit card, moreover, there will be no coins involved.
Despite the benefits of cashless payment, there are also some drawbacks. The biggest concern of cashless payment is certainly security. As you can purchase items online with a few clicks of buttons, your credit card details could be hacked. In today’s world, millions of peoples credit card details are leaked through internet which resulted a great loss in money.
In conclusion, the age of cashless society is coming quicker than expected and it is inevitable. The government and bank should put in concerted effort to seek for solutions to secure people’s assets.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ontroversies and drawn the attention of general public. Personally, I am more inclined towards...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, may, moreover, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1161.0 1207.87684729 96% => OK
No of words: 225.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68646722906 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 349.2 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2222659697 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.3076923077 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.25397266985 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354217735021 0.242375264174 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121907170756 0.0925447433944 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684512950033 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19024877742 0.151781067708 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471182998086 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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