Success is often measured in wealth and material belongings.
Does wealth measure success ?
What makes a successful person ?
Many people believe that one is success if one has abound of wealth and material belongings. Well, it is not completely wrong. Because, successful person means that they have already achieved their dream and has a stable finance or already considered as settle. It is not peculiar if they have tons of worthy belongings in their residential area. I believe that wealth measure success as a person becomes very rich after they gain successful life.
For example, someone has no worthy life to begin with, but, they do not give up and dedicate their life so they can success. They climb each steps with struggle and difficulties. However, efforts will never betray you. All their hardships will eventually turn into success. By becoming a successful person, you will gain more in terms of wealth and valueable prized possessions. Most of successful people around the world spend their wealth for investment, such as buying a house, a car, or shares. Those can be considered as a little present of satisfication.
Hardwork and courage are the most important thing which can make someone successful. If they believe in themselves and have enough courage and confidence to seek opportunities, at the end, they will achieve it. Despite the facts stated previously, there are also some people who fornunately born in a wealthy family. They grow up very comfortabely and will inherited their family company, which make them successful people.
Overall, it is depends on someone’s belief. Nonetheless, it is clearly that wealth can measure sucess as successful people earn so much.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-01-28 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 84 | view |
| 2020-06-13 | SUSANNA PETROSYAN | 80 | view |
| 2020-06-07 | gisellanathania | 61 | view |
- The charts below give the information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 68
- The charts below give the information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food To what extent do you agree or disagree with 61
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 53
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 52, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'abounded'.
Suggestion: abounded
... believe that one is success if one has abound of wealth and material belongings. Well...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 500, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this can' or 'Those cans'?
Suggestion: This can; Those cans
...ch as buying a house, a car, or shares. Those can be considered as a little present of sa...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'inherit'
Suggestion: inherit
...They grow up very comfortabely and will inherited their family company, which make them s...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nonetheless, so, well, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13953488372 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74763283733 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8706980809 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6666666667 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55555555556 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332285814036 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101800979195 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119342004674 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218984412074 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101897182603 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.