People nowadays work hard to buy more things. This has made our lives generally more comfortable, but many traditional values and customs have been lost and this is a pity.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that people strive more to succeed and obtain more stuff than it used to in the past, to improve their daily life comfort. Therefore it causes misplaced cultural values and habits. I believe both of these considerations have a good value to discuss.
In modern times, production sources are increased and this enables us to have access easily rather than past. Consequently, people tend to have more materials, goods to improve conditions. For instance, buying mobile phones and having internet Access are enhanced our standards in a smart way such as ordering food or requesting a service were not been easier than now. Thereby, comfort is increased and habits to be changed.
On the other hand, the tendency of having more comfort and material is caused to deteriorate of various traditional values. In the past, people were in more contact with each other and were sharing and helping when needed but now opportunities are increased but bonds are weakened. In other words, when a person needs a car, he was used to using his neighbor; this was a habit that no longer exists. Also, having dinner with family and friends is replaced by self-eating. Hereby, people lost valuable moments with precious people.
To conclude, it is obviously true that we are as people gained much more items than as we used to, in order to provide ourselves with better conditions and we continuously work for it. But, since we gain more comfort, we lost more than what it brings. Not only we lost traditions but also lost valuable habits. More importantly, we lost sharing moments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a smart way" with adverb for "smart"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ernet Access are enhanced our standards in a smart way such as ordering food or requesting a s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, therefore, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91011235955 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58099450499 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606741573034 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3065944428 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265213586193 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870660969027 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443643673278 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153425213823 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00891675297265 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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