In many countries the cost of living is rising. What are the effects on individuals and society? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?
In the modern day, the problem of steady growth of living conditions has raised a great deal of public attention as well as both society and individuals are being suffered from negative impacts. In this essay, from my point of view, identifying main influences is the key to seeking out methods, which help to handle this problem.
It is a common belief that the raising of living standards render numerous influences on each person and the whole society. Firstly, in terms of accommodation, the rate of homelessness is becoming popular in megacities because those people, especially, immigrants are unable to afford the exorbitant prices of flats or room for rent. Thus, this situation exerts a burden on the local charities when they have to allocate state budget not only to find a shelter but also to offer medical systems for those immigrants. More importantly, other social infrastructure such as firefighters, police, and education may be not received adequate investments from governments, which could result in a disruption in long-term development.
On the one hand, there is a wide range of measures, which are proposed to deal with this problem. Firstly, governments take responsibility for taking a step into either construction of affordable accommodation or offering job vacancies. In fact, these strategies would be able to not only dismantle the pressure about the state of homelessness but also gain the figure for Gross Domestic Products. As a result, when the financial ability in one nation improves, governments have massive resources to invest in other sectors such as educational systems and safeguard, which contribute to a safer society and intellectual community. In addition, in terms of short-term methods, a claim of foreign-sponsored could be considered as an emergency measure.
In conclusion, the exorbitant price of the living condition has caused various negative effects on both society and individuals in one nation. In order to deal with this problem, reasonable measures should be taken into consideration to either improve the host economy or satisfy their citizens’ living demands.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... society and individuals in one nation. In order to deal with this problem, reaso...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. In order to deal with this problem, reasonable measures should be taken into...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35820895522 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11019278756 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602985074627 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.4313124606 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.076923077 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21398563698 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737767907094 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757890933365 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149589810931 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957379597064 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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