Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, children are spend free times with social media and they don’t do any significant activities compared to the past. In the past, children have high activity, because they always moving and playing. So I agree with this point.
People today are lees active especially children. For example, some children spend more time with mobile phone, watch video, play video games and other types of games. Other children, spend most of their time sleeping and watching TV. As we can see in the most houses, they sit with TV and witch animated films. Another important thing is parents buy phones for their children that big issue we face in these day because this devices will affects children for many ways, for instance., they will learn bad things and do unethical things.
I believe that sport lesson will help them to be active. Also, sport is very important for children. I n addition to that, develop children’s skills and mental abilities. Moreover, exercise helps move blood in the body and increase muscles. Parents must spend most of their time with their children in order to be able to see, creative and think. Play free may affect children’s behavior in terms of developing their knowledge. Besides that, encouraging children to learn and increase their thinking, this helps them increase their activity.
To sum up, I think that sport’s lessons in schools is good thing for children. Children should spend their free time in reading for example, or in useful things. We must educate our children on education in order to be good in society.
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 66
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: spent
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Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'these days'?
Suggestion: this day; these days
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Suggestion: these
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98091603053 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38343116727 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583969465649 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.060985999 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61111111111 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274068679418 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962915274437 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549696031079 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185160145894 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435729790304 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.01 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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