some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that ecomomic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People have different views about economic development whether it solely turn down the rate of poverty or the scale of environmental pollution would be exacerbated. In this essay, from my point of view, I believe that economic growth has either merits or demerits toward the environment and poverty alleviation.
On the one hand, it is a common belief that a well-rounded economy in one nation plays an important role to ensure wealth and sustainable enhancement. This is because economic advancement not only creates tons of job vacancies, which may put an end to the rate of unemployment but also enhances citizens’ living conditions. More importantly, with a view to mitigating the state of starvation, there is no doubt that the government has the extraordinary financial ability to trickle down to the less fortunate. Thus, the lower classes who cannot afford the basic necessities of life can have better lives.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that environmental deterioration results from economic growth. To be more specific, it is true that heavy industry is the main reason for climate change which renders negative impacts on ecosystems, especially, numerous marine species have died and the acreage of icebergs has been shrunk. Nevertheless, a more persuasive measure rather than stopping economic growth is that the government should impose a more stricter policy toward some businesses for irresponsible activities on the environment. Thus, this measure may ensure either human well-being or diverse nature.
In conclusion, although economic enhancement can render several negative effects on the ecosystems, it still plays an indispensable part in the development of civilization. However, the natural protective should be on the top priority and the government and individuals take responsibility for conserving.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 556, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...the lower classes who cannot afford the basic necessities of life can have better lives. On the ...
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Line 3, column 443, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'stricter' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stricter
... is that the government should impose a more stricter policy toward some businesses for irres...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ls take responsibility for conserving.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, no doubt, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49647887324 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16589047936 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609154929577 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4800204836 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.083333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161817321919 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564989449596 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520388822908 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0957209408538 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616381674369 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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